The Edale Project- Tutorial

In our tutorial Esther raised some good points. She told us that the editing was a bit predictable therefore we needed to use a different range of editing techniques to make the shots and narrative more exciting instead of just cut...cut...cut. She made a point that the low level lighting at the beginning where Mark looks at the map is a problem within the continuity of the edit and to change the shots for better professionalism of the look of the film. Finally the problem that myself and Mark spotted was the hair that was caught in the lens on the last shot of the film short. These things all needed to by corrected in the fine cut that myself and Mark have arranged to do on the 8th November.